Sure, here are the revised versions of your passages with some minor corrections and improvements for clarity:
1. Purchasing Notes
Christmas is approaching, and stores have already adorned their windows with images of Santa Claus, starting their discounts and promotions. Not to be outdone, I went to Tianyi Mall last Saturday to buy greeting cards.
Upon arriving at the mall, I was overwhelmed by everything before my eyes. The booths were neatly arranged in rows like a grid, with over twenty stalls in total. Each stall displayed a variety of goods, leaving me unsure of where to start shopping. After browsing around, I finally settled on a stall, Hero No. 04. From the outside, it had a wide selection of products, and the owner was friendly. I cautiously asked,"How much for wholesale greeting cards?"The lady boss eagerly replied,"Five yuan for three cards."I said,"I'll take 30 cards. If you offer a better deal, I'll have all my classmates buy from you."She chuckled and said,"You're quite the business-savvy kid! Alright, I trust you. I'll sell you for one yuan per card."I negotiated,"I'll take 30 cards for 28 yuan, okay?"She relented,"Fine, fine! But remember to come here for more shopping in the future!"I promptly agreed, paid her, and she cheerfully said,"Take your pick!"Suddenly, I realized I hadn't even chosen the cards yet! After carefully selecting a few, I waved goodbye happily and headed home.
I realized that shopping can be quite enjoyable!
2. Thoughts on Setting Off Fireworks
Fireworks burst forth in a myriad of colors, resembling a beautiful flowerbed. They cascaded down like countless silver threads, akin to waterfalls or delicate fairy veils. The fireworks shimmered with emerald-green ripples, reminiscent of lake waves... all indicating our boundless joy and happiness in life, hoping for an even brighter future.
On the fifth day of the lunar new year, our family of five gathered downstairs to set off fireworks. You might ask,"Why set off fireworks on the fifth day?"Haha! You might not know this—it's to ward off sadness on this day.
I lifted a firecracker, placed it on a stone, struck a match, approached cautiously, and finally lit it. The firecracker crackled deafeningly, startling me into running onto the grass. After about a minute, the noise subsided, and I emerged from the grass, saying to my dad,"Dad, this isn't exciting enough! Get me a bigger one."Just as I finished speaking, Dad pulled out a large one from his pocket, about 30 cm wide and 40 cm tall. I carefully placed it on the ground, lit it cautiously, then quickly stepped back. There was a rustling sound, followed by a bang and a whoosh. Turning around, I saw the firework blooming in the night sky, splendid and beautiful like a flowerbed or a painting, like a spring meadow... I was captivated by its beauty. Excitedly, I ran to my family and exclaimed,"It's so beautiful, so spectacular!"
Fireworks paint blessings for the new spring in the colorful night sky.
3. Triggering Thoughts
At noon, while the cold wind whistled by, we sat in the warm fifth-grade science classroom, listening to a fascinating astronomy class. The teacher posed a question that sparked my contemplation.
"There were originally nine planets in the universe, but Pluto deviated from its original orbit and left the solar system, leaving us with only eight planets,"the teacher explained softly. Pointing to a planetary map, she continued,"The Earth orbits the sun, while the moon orbits the Earth. They each have their own orbits."Clearing her throat amidst the noise, she asked, disappointedly,"Do you know why we have day and night?"No hands went up, prompting her to declare,"Consider it your homework!"
Back home, I carefully pondered the teacher's question. It seemed quite challenging.
I thought: To have day and night, there must be a luminous object involved, and it must involve principles of angles. I figured I could find the answer online, so I powered up my computer and began typing rhythmically, searching for what I needed."Ah! I found it, I found it!"I exclaimed joyfully. The answer I found was: It's the sun and the moon that emit light, each at different angles. But that didn't fully answer the teacher's question. I continued to contemplate: Why do we have the sun and the moon? Why do they shine light on Earth?
Suddenly, it clicked for me. I hurriedly ran to my grandfather's room, flipping through"Star Gazette.""Ah-ha! The answer."I quickly pointed and began reading word by word. It said that the sun's heat reaches up to 300 degrees. When its light beams enter the atmosphere, molecules resist them, attempting to combat the intense light. However, the sun's light is too powerful. Even after resistance, some of it still shines down onto the slowly moving Earth. At night, the side that received sunlight earlier now reflects the moon's radiant light, while the side in shadow receives moonlight. This creates Earth's rotation, resulting in both day and night.
At night, a brilliant, gleaming moon spins overhead. It was the moon and the sun that sparked my contemplation, gave me cause to think, and opened the door to deeper thought. This, I believe, is what the great scientist Einstein referred to as"the thinking of human beings."
2. 放花*的联想
烟花绽放，万紫千红，如同美丽的花坛。烟花飞泻，银丝无数，仿佛瀑布飞流，轻若仙女的纱。烟花摇曳，碧绿光波，如同湖面波光粼粼……这一切都展现了我们无限的欢乐和生活的无限幸福，期待更加美好的未来。
大年初五晚上，我们全家五口聚在楼下放烟花。你可能会问，为什么选择初五放烟花呢？哈哈，也许你不知道，初五意味着驱除不祥之意。我端起一根鞭*，放在石头上，点燃火柴，小心翼翼地靠近，最终点燃。鞭*发出震耳欲聋的声响，吓得我跑到草地上去。大约一分钟后，鞭*声逐渐消失，我从草地上跑出来，对爸爸说：“爸爸，这未免太不好玩了吧！给我拿个大的来。”话音刚落，爸爸从口袋里掏出一个大约三十厘米宽，四十厘米高的大烟花，我小心翼翼地抱起，上了台阶放在地上，再次小心翼翼地点燃烟花，然后迅速后退。只听见沙沙声后，随即是砰和哗的一声，我转过身，看见烟花在夜空中绽放，如花坛般绚烂美丽，如画卷般壮观，如春日原野般……我为其美丽所陶醉。我兴奋地跑向家人，说：“太漂亮了，太壮观了！”
烟花在万紫千红的夜空中描绘出新春的祝福。
3. 这引起了我的思考
正午时分，寒风呼啸而过，我们坐在温暖的五年级科学教室里，聆听着一堂别开生面的天文知识课。老师提出的问题引起了我的深思。
回到家，我仔细思考着老师提出的问题，觉得这问题相当具有挑战*。
突然，我恍然大悟。我急忙跑到爷爷的房间，翻阅起《星球之报》。“噢，*！”我迅速指着，一个字一个字地慢慢读。报道说，太阳的热量高达300度。当它的光线进入大气层时，分子们试图抵御这些光线，试图抵御这些强光。但太阳的光线太强大了。即使有抵抗，仍有一部分射向地球的慢慢移动上午。在晚上，被太阳光照射的这一面现在反射出月光，而在*影中反射月光，形成了地球的自转，从而形成了白天和黑夜。
在晚上，一轮皎洁的明月在空中转动。正是它与太阳的相互影响引发了我的深思，它们启迪了我，它们开启了我思考的大门。这也是伟大科学家爱因斯坦所说的“人类思考”。
小学作文描写花2
1.我最爱月季
我喜欢倾听竹的低唱,因为它有洒脱的风度,刚直的气节;我喜欢欣赏菊的风雅,因为它有清秀的姿态,凌霜的傲骨……然而最让我神魂颠倒的却是月季.
月季是我国十大名花之一.它种类繁多,颜*五彩缤纷.有象征爱情和真挚纯洁的爱的红月季,有寓意尊敬和崇高的白月季,有表示初恋的粉红月季,珍稀的蓝紫*月季,还有黄*,橙黄*,绿白*,双*,三*月季……月季还有表示兴旺发达的含意呢!
这么多的月季花就像一道道电脑程序,我的鼠标停在了粉红月季的显示屏上,走不动了.
或曰月季太娇贵,或曰月季太庸俗.我不以为然.月季虽然没有梅花傲立风雪的劲头,也没有荷花般圣洁,自然也无雪莲般珍贵.她的外表是娇艳欲滴,非常可人,但它不是空虚的,她是外柔内刚.她向竹子学习"咬定青山不放松",战胜了风风雨雨,盛开在你眼前.她何尝不是"野火烧不尽,春风吹又生"当"夜阑卧听风吹雨",谁知月季"花落知多少"但她依然月月傲放枝头.
朋友,你一定见过月季花花柄上的一个个针,非常扎头.我便曾经因为去摘而割破手指.每当我被眼前美好的事物迷住时,告诉我:美好的事物往往是个诱饵,它时常伴随着一些灾难,一些陷阱,提醒我不要纵身跳下去.
我爱月季的花容月貌,我更爱她独特的品质!
2.花中皇后——月季
有人喜爱鲜艳富丽的牡丹,有人喜爱幽香袭人的兰花,有人喜爱映日的荷花,我却独独喜爱那经久不凋的月季.
宋代诗人杨万里曾写下"只道花无十日红,此花无处不春风"的优美诗句来赞美月季那花季长久的习*,论华美它远不如牡丹,论气质它不如兰花,但它那经久不凋的意志却无花能比.
月季的花朵十分美丽光艳,像婴儿甜美的笑脸,花瓣鲜艳润厚,含有清香,令人陶醉.月季开花有早有迟,一般在2—12月间花朵就陆续开放,一株上各种姿态的花都有,含羞待放的花骨朵像闺中待嫁的小姐,刚刚有点绽放的花儿沾着露珠让人豁然开朗,完全盛开的花朵幽香四散让人陶醉,花托酷似小汤圆,上面还留有沁人心扉的花香呢!
月季的适应*很强,凡公司,名胜,学校,医院等都可以看见它的足迹,它也可作为布置花坛,点缀家居之用.
月季的繁殖力十分旺盛,春天你只需把剪下的大枝干放入水中待生根后再栽入泥土之中,便可成活了.月季的分布地区十分广泛,深受大家的喜爱,天津,大连,郑州,南昌,常州都把月季视为市花.
啊!月季,我爱你的秀美和恬静,更爱你那经久不凋生命旺盛的习*,你不愧为花中皇后!
3.那支如血的月季
也许是生活环境,养成了我孤僻的习惯,我不喜欢与人说话,只喜欢一人坐在林中,静静聆听鸟儿的欢声笑语.
因为父母工作关系,我转到一所市中心小学,面对这些陌生的面孔与环境,我心中产生一股厌恶感.当我走进校门不远,我看到花坛处有一位女孩微笑着向我招手,示意我过去.我走了过去,冷冷地问:"什么事"那女孩笑了,虽笑得很可爱,但在我眼里只是碎琼烂玉,她对我说:"我叫云,你好,听说你叫琦,*格比较孤僻,我和你交个朋友好吗"我淡淡一笑,正准备离去,不禁-看到一团红,只是红,红得动人心魄,它拨动了我内心深处一支锈迹斑斑的弦"丁冬"一声,心中有一股无法控制的喜悦,我转身对那女孩说:"我愿意和你做朋友."云笑了,像天上五彩的云.
在整个学校,我只对云与那株月季说心里话,我和云常来到月季旁给它浇水,时而躺在草地上,仰望天空,看鸟儿飞过,就像在以前那片林中,虽然我和云说话并不多,但我们却很默契,但对于我来说,我从未对另外一个人说过与云说的那么多的话,包括我的父母!
那天,我拿起水壶,去给月季浇水,当我来到那株月季前,只看到几片叶子在随风飘动,那如血的花儿竟不知去向,远处,我看到一个女孩手中捧着一束月季朝我走来,那是云."哐当"水壶掉落在地上,我眼中噙满了泪水,云见了,忙跑过来,向我解释:"不是的……"我捂住耳朵不要听,为什么是云,如果是别人,我可以向云倾诉,可那人竟是云,云,算我看错了眼,我*地瞪了云一眼,捂住耳朵转身就跑,只留下云的一脸无辜,我听见后边传来云的叫喊声:"琦,你为什么不听我的解释""因为你的解释是多余的!"随后,身后传来一阵哭声……
我跑到了和云经常去的地方,想起刚认识云时和与她相处的日子,泪水模糊了我的眼睛,一颗滚烫的泪从我的脸上流过,半天就在发呆中度过,那半天,我没上一节课.刚走到家门,便听到一个熟悉的声音:"琦琦这个孩子,在学校……"那是班主任的声音,我推开门,往房间跑去"喂,琦琦给班主任问个好.""哐"门被我用力关上了,随后传来了"这孩子,打小就这样,请您别见怪."
我在屋中翻开画册,画起人来.当我寂莫,无聊时,我总会画画,虽画的人很传神,脸上却总挂着让人难以理解的忧伤……
第二天,我来到班中,发现抽屉中放着一封写给我的信,我展开信纸,一些熟悉的字体印入我的眼中:
琦,你好!那天,你生气地离开,不想听我做任何解释,我正的好担心,担心你会不要我这个朋友,更担心你会不像以前那样沉默,现在,请你听我解释好吗那天,我正准备给月季浇水,发现几个底年级的小朋友将,花折了下来,见我来了,忙扔下花,我捡起花,正巧被你撞见,所以才使你误会了,你到花坛那儿去一下好吗我在那儿等你.
小学描写胡言的好段3
爸爸说：“不知天高地厚的丫头，我看你倒像个贪吃的小八戒!”我听了爸爸的话，冲着爸爸就来了个单腿蹲立一手挠头的姿势，口里还喊道：“看棒!”我的确喜欢孙悟空。“也有例外的。我看你家明明虽说眼睛像你，大大的，眉毛像他爸爸，又长又细，可那副耳朵，又大又软，耳轮线条还和一般人不一样。怪了，像谁呢?”女青年侧着头盯着小孩的.耳朵看。暑假的一天晌午，爷爷挠着寸把长的头发唠叨着爸爸挺长时间没回家了。这时，我对爷爷说：“爷爷，我给你理发吧!”爷爷笑着说：“你?笤帚疙瘩戴帽——充人哩。”“你别隔着门缝看人，要是理不好，一分钱不要。”忽然一只大手在我头顶上轻轻拍了一下，一个熟悉而亲切的声音传进我的耳朵：“袁静，你怎么还不回家呢?”我抬头一看，是教我们数学的孙老师在我的旁边；“这道题我总是做不出来。”我苦着脸说。“好，我来教你。”于是，孙老师坐在旁边，一步一步地给我讲解。我的脑瓜儿真笨，听了两遍还不懂，越急越糊涂。孙老师安慰我：“别急嘛，仔细想想。”接着，又一边画图一边耐心地讲起来，直到我弄懂为止。“地上建一个武术馆，等我把醉拳、武当剑学好了去当教练。”拳迷的话音刚落，李小胖马上反对：“武术馆建到江滨去好。溪边的杨柳淤沙地又平又软，练武不伤人。那馒头山顶造个火箭发射台最合适。人们乘着我发明的宇宙飞船去太空遨游，到月亮、木星上去都可以，早上去晚上回来……”
